2002-11-28 @ 12:22 p.m.
poledra
Layout: 7/10 I don't particular like this image, sorry, but the whole site looks well organized, great colors, not hard on the eyes, plus you designed it yourself.
Navigation: 10/10 Everything neatly ordered under the picture.
Contact: 5/5 Mail, guestbook, notes, AIM, ICQ and MSN on the profile.
Errors: 5/5 None.
Extras: 10/10 Disclaimer, reviews, quizzes, about, cast, DISC profile, links, Imood, counter.
Updates: 9/10 Fairly regular, missed some days, but also got some multiples.
Content: 40/50 You basically talk about your daily life a lot, now and then you write about how you feel about things. You of course talk about school a lot, as you say yourself, it's what is most important in your life right now, so it's perfectly okay to write about it. Your writing itself is good, it's nice to read, without mistakes, apart from the odd typo here and there and it can be funny sometimes. Overall, there's nothing wrong with it, it just can get a little boring sometimes. Try to mix it with some more emotion. While reading some entries of which the titles interested me, I came across this one, where you talk about grandma, it's a great entry, you really write about how you felt and all, I could really relate to this entry. Overall I found this to be a good diary, which reflects your life and you pretty well.
Extra points: 3 I'll be back now and then to catch up on you and see how you're doing.
Comments: Not that much anymore, I guess everything has been said, except, I didn't really like your sporadic use of capitals, but I guess it's everyone for her-/himself. Oh, and you don't have a title for your diary, I noticed that hen I wanted to put it above the review, so I jut used Poledra, if that's okay.
Final Score: 89/100 (Blake Allen) Well done!
Reviewed by: Ally